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The water Witch

Do you believe in ghosts? If not you about to change your perspective. Our names are Aqua and Naomi, and we are twins theoretically. We're both seventeen.

Naomi's P.O.V.
It was hot summer day on our 17th birthday. Aqua and I decided to take a dip into our pool before anyone got in there. I dove in first and made a Huge slash having some water fall out of our fifteen foot deep po
ol. Then she jumps in and her foot caught the edge of the pool and she fell in the water. All I could see was her foot. I gasped and looked around when I saw her not floating up. I dove in to save her. Just then something grabbed my throat and I was stuck under the surface of the slightly heated pool.

Auqu's P.O.V.
My chest started to burn without the oxygen that I needed badly right about now. I saw a dark apparition puling my sister deep into the cold water. Suddenly their was a bright light. I started to flip out and kick and squirm witch made my oxygen need worse. Seeing Naomi struggle made me feel bad. The light got to bright and I gave up before blacking out their were two great big splashes. Then there was nothing.

Naomi's P.O.V.
Suddenly I awoke coughing up water, and my twenty pound cat's face was right in mine. I screamed and pushed the fat cat onto the unstable book shelf. Then I heard foot steps and curled up in the corner of my bed and started sobbing thinking it was the ghost coming back to get me. I gave a loud scream hoping someone would come and save me.

Matthew's P.O.V.
I suddenly heard my girlfriend , Naomi , screaming bloody murder as if being killed slowly and painfully. As I stood at her door with my hand on the handle I could have sworn my heart was pounding so fast it would hop out of my chest and run away. I flung the door open seeing Naomi was alright I let out a sigh. I slowly walked over to her bed and warped my arms around her. Feeling her jump made me feel bad. I ran my fingers threw her soft,long black and red hair. I wispier softly wanting to calm her ," Love, what is wrong?". She shakily hugged me back and said just above a wispier ,"W-Were is my sister?". I felt the cold tears run down her warm face. Still in a soft tone ,"she is down stares with Arthur."

Arthur's P.O.V.
Aqua has been like this for hours. I know she is breathing because she is hyperventilating. I massaged her shoulders slightly feeling how tense she was. She woke moments later, punching me in the face. I feel back from the soft couch to the carpeted floor holding my now bleeding nose. DANG SHE CAN PACK A FREAKING PUNCH! Aqua sat up almost eminently afterwords panting. She slowly got her air back. "Ouch", I said holding my bloody nose. She looked over at me and gasped. "oh my- ARTHUR! are you alright", she said hugging me.

Aqua's P.O.V.
I look at his nose. "it's alright love...just pain", he said with a chuckle.OH, that British accents was so hot! It made my heart melt! "Well I am glad to know your alright ... What's wrong-" he said and before he could finish his sentence Naomi burst threw the door. "SIS!", she yelled out of breath. Then she ran over and hugged me tightly nearly knocking the couch over. She started to sob as I hugged her back. " A-Are you alright sissy?" I said softly. she between sobs ,"A-A bit s-s-scared!". I saw Arthur get up and walk over to Matthew, then starts a conversation with him. Nightfall came a bit to quickly for my taste. I had an uneasy sleep. I look around my bed to my right was Arthur to my left Naomi ... Then no Matthew? 'what the heck?' I thought. I tried to get away but Arthur and Naomi held me down. Some how i got away and before i left Arthur snore slightly witch made me leave giggling. I surcharged the hole house, it took me about and hour and a half. Finely I went outside to find Matthews foot hanging out of the pool. I stopped their tearing up slightly before yelling , " Matthew! I-IF THIS IS A JOKE I-IT ISN'T FUNNY!"slowly I walked over to the pool. I claimed up the ladder with my eyes closed and when i reached the top and opened my eyes I let out a scream like a banshie crying hard. I fell off the ladder what luck huh? Arthur caught me. I was still crying, the tears made my vision blurred. Then I saw Naomi clime the ladder then come down only to run inside quickly crying. Again nightfall came to quickly. Out of the corner of my eye I saw Naomi run out back.

Naomi's P.O.V.
Remembering Matthew what he looked like in the pool. his guts were floating every were his skin was blue....I couldn't take it anymore. I climbed to long latter crying as I see the the witch who killed the man I loved with my life. I cried hard as i said "witch of the waters take my life as well". She replied in a cute little voice "why? Oh, do come in and play with me!". As I am about to take my first step into the water ... Aqua she tacked me in the witch hissed at this sine.

Aqua's P.O.V.
I tackled my sister into the pool as my boyfriend came in after me. He knew black magic and knew how to get rid of the dang thing. I helped her swim up. I slap her and yell "WHAT IN THE HECK WERE YOU THINKING?!" I sighed and said " we'll talk about it later....". Arthur cuts the pool with a kitchen knife then slips out then Naomi and I are pulled out by him. Naomi stood up looking down "why did she do that?! SHE KILLED THE MAN I LOVED!" then she began crying. I say under my breath "thank you dad for teaching me how to use a sword!" then I grabbed my dead feather sword he had gotten from the King of England three mouths before he died. I swing it at her she seemed to be fritend then i dropped it my hands still being wet. The sword hit the ground loudly making my wins from the noise. When the sword hit the ground the ghost yelped and held her knee. I look closely at her "hey guys she looks like.....she's only...8...HOLY CRAP1 THE KING KILLED HIS DAUGHTER AND BLAMED IT ON HIS WIFE!" I said in shock. "brake the sword Aqua" Arthur said. WHAT?!?!? ARE YOU CRAZY!?MY DAD GAVE ME THAT!" I started to tear up ... the thought of braking the only memory my father gave me made me so sad. I picked it up and cry, i start a fire. takes the jewel out and kisses the sword then throws it in the fire Naomi and i cry Arthur hugs us and shushes us kindly and softly as the ghost die. "shh it's alright guys...it'll all be okay" he said hugging us.

Years later we put that jewel on a necklaces. The beautiful blush jewl matched her blue eyes the ghost left them alown but some days they could hear the scream of her dieing.

The
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(I made this story... any Matthews that read this I'm sorry you died! :( i feel bad but  like how i made the story. sorry for Sps and gramer fails o.o' tell me what you think please? ^^)
(i don't own hetalia i gust got it off of Google o.o')
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XAlternateXUniverseX Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I found this story after reading every story I can, you seemed the nicest out of every set of reply comments I read.
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Alicethequietrose Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh why thank you
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XAlternateXUniverseX Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*smiles*
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XAlternateXUniverseX Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
If you would be a dear, will you tell me what Hetalia is? My friend mentioned it to me ad I'm not sure what it is. I know it's an anime but what is it about?
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Alicethequietrose Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well, It is about would history. It is funny. Their are really cute guys with acccents and more
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XAlternateXUniverseX Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
..........A-accents?
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oliverkirklandfreak Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Poor Matthew!
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Alicethequietrose Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I know. I had to my friend liked that name and nammedher crush that
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AnimeLeaderVI Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012
Not bad!!!
May you write many more :D
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Alicethequietrose Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
like a part 2?
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